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 It’s time to make contrast and comparison paragraph. And I got an interesting idea. I make comparison and contrast of Bandung and Surabaya city. On Wednesday, my assignment was reviewed by Nisa and I reviewed Nisa’s paragraph. Nisa wrote an interesting paragraph by the title Orchid and Cactus. But, both of us did not make a really good paragraph because we did not write the concluding sentence. And as Mrs. Vita said that good paragraph of contrast and comparison has concluding sentence that is available the preference of subjects.

Let’s move to Friday with presentation section. On that day there were at least 5 presenters including me. When Aris presented his paragraph, Mrs. Vita assumed that it’s not paragraph but an essay because there was space between one or two sentences. However, Aris said that actually it’s a paragraph but he modified it for making easy. It should not be done actually since it would make the reader misunderstanding.

And on that day, I got new lesson that theme and topic is not a sentence but a word or a phrase. For instance, “The woman joins military” that is topic sentence, “woman” that is the topic. The other lesson is intro /opening sentence is not always topic sentence, that’s why topic sentence is not always in the beginning of paragraph. And my friends said that “don’t judge the paragraph from the first paragraph”.